Sonic - Green Hill Zone Orchestral Cover By Peshtiwar Botani
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164732
Level 12 Mixist
peshti
 
 
post #164732 :: 2022.12.20 12:17pm
  
  mirageofher, roz, 02FD and Lincent liēkd this
Take my Sonic - Green Hill Zone Orchestral Cover for a spin if you want 🙂

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WQGG3tM0ROg

Thanks

Peshti
 
 
164736
Level 24 Chipist
Lincent
 
 
 
post #164736 :: 2022.12.20 1:05pm
  
  mirageofher and peshti liēkd this
Really awesome, I want to spin up into a ball and zoom around
 
 
164738
Level 22 Mixist
02FD
 
 
 
post #164738 :: 2022.12.20 1:09pm
  
  mirageofher and peshti liēkd this
Very cool! If you don't mind, I do have a couple critiques:
1. The countermelody that plays at the end of the bar in the original is too subtle, in my opinion, being played by the backing strings, and then not at all during the brass section.
2. This feels a little short! I wish it were longer so that it could build up to the end a little more. It feels like it goes to the slow portion a little too early.
Anyway, some positives:
3. The way you turned the intro into a slower buildup had me hooked immediately. That felt like the perfect way to transcribe this to an orchestral piece.
4. Your tempo control is impeccable.
5. The choir works very well here. All in all, the mix is great.
6. The dynamics are very realistic.
 
 
164746
Level 12 Mixist
peshti
 
 
post #164746 :: 2022.12.20 3:25pm
  
  mirageofher liēkd this
Lincent

You're far too kind! There's a bunch I can improve but I'm happy =).

02FD
There's a bunch of things I could do differently, this is definitely too short and it actually took me 6 months or something to write this, there's a good reason for it. When I started this project I had 2 fulltime jobs which killed me, now I only have on like a normal human being. By the time I was able to compose more on this track my motivation for it was killed so I guess it just eneded too short.

I'm really happy about the positive feedback since I have been struggling to make decent music and I feel like it starts to click lately. I appreciate all feedback, the good and the bad.

Thanks for your time and listening!
 
 

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