I really like the harmonies! Your vocals and your guitar playing remind me of Bowie. Also like the combination of guitar and piano

the warble of your vocal vibrato is magical. it's fast, like a 4Bx or so! i don't think i can do that! lovely tune too - i want more of it!

thanks so much!!! preston you wouldn't believe how much it's lit up my day to be compared to the GOAT.

& thanks dami, i wish i'd had more time to develop it but i only started work at 9 & have elderly neighbours downstairs so i had to wrap things up quick!! this was an OHB to me. also the vocal vibrato is something that's been remarked on before & the truth is i don't know how not to do it ;0

wow this is beautiful!! i love how the guitar+piano+your vocals sound as a whole, it's such a strong vibe that i wanted to soak in for far longer! (though i get why you had to cut it short)

I can't decide if this is a perfect little snack just the way it is, or if it ought to lead to even more - I'm envisioning this bit as a nice quiet intro that lauches into an overwhelming barrage of Moody Blues style mellotron-laced prog psychadelic rock.

did you write the lyrics in the order in which they are sung, or did you write one little big first to start, and grow the rest of the lines around it?

ohh so many nice comments!! <3 yea block i actually had a couple of individual phrases & a rough structure in mind and wrote around that, starting with the last verse.

also love your singing voice. And ALWAYS love the feel I get from your guitar + piano combo when it appears

i... i want more