this is one of deuveir's eyes

I do not have much critique for this one. It's very interesting. Maybe a little bit more narrative would give understanding to an audience but it is not really neccessary. It does not loop for me. Thank you for entering! It's really great.

I made it very fast, yeah. I think it made more sense in my head. I wanted it to be slowly getting more and more dense until it was just completely black and you would not be able to tell if it's still going or if it stopped. This concept is stressful

Thank you for your explanation! Explanations are important too. I can tell there is a stop, but it might just have to do with the resolution of the image out of the program you exported it from, so that wouldn't be your fault if so. To make it look all black, you could open the GIF in GIMP and add black all over the last frame. There are some particles I see in the gif currently. So that is my advice on how you could do that! This is just my personal opinion though so take it with a grain of salt, I get the concept either way so its great for an hour's work!