Arcane Toaster
Level 22 Chipist
 
allgear
7th/76

 
springiness 
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equinox 
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germinations 
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flower power 
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spring in pants 
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Arizona
 
  26th/358   Σ28.456   Apr 27th 2025 9:54am
 
 
A track that began life back in 2022, I think! One of the first tracks I wrote with a somewhat prominent vocal line. Was partially stuck in development hell because I was learning to get comfortable with my voice. Was originally thinking of submitting this for the vocal format, but the other track I'm currently cooking up (and will hopefully finish in time!) has a more prominent vocal line thruout the track that does more STUFF so I think that might be more appropriate for that format maybe!? Anyways here's the song ggght

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Sun-melted terrains
And latter-day saints
I heard a scream from a high window pane

Man and equine
Moved in straight lines
The speed limit said 45

Boys on the street
Are packing some heat
The iron sight dream jangles down at their feet

Out in the haze
Warmer embrace
“Shut up and wipe that sneer/smile off your face” (I forgot my line while singing so adlib that word I guess!!!)
She said solemnly
“Welcome to Hell
Welcome to Arizona”

Back when we met
And watched the moon set
Loudly she sighed and wiped all the sweat from her furrowed brow
“Could've been worse,
It’s a long way to North Dakota”
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216050
Level 26 Chipist
Prestune
 
 
 
post #216050 :: 2025.04.27 10:13am
  
  RevvoBolt, lasersphaser, retrokid104 and Arcane Toaster liēkd this
as an Arizonan, I approve of this song
 
 
216051
Level 10 Mixist
BANANA TRASH
 
 
post #216051 :: 2025.04.27 10:14am
  
  cabbage drop liēkd this
Spectacular.
 
 
216073
Level 8 Mixist
NovaZ
 
 
post #216073 :: 2025.04.27 2:04pm
  
  cabbage drop liēkd this
This is so beautiful! <3
 
 
216085
Level 7 Writist
wLngw
 
 
post #216085 :: 2025.04.27 3:07pm
  
  cabbage drop liēkd this
Terrifically pretty!
 
 
216108
Level 10 Chipist
Nivi
 
 
post #216108 :: 2025.04.27 9:33pm
  
  cabbage drop liēkd this
Very nice, good job!
 
 
216118
Level 26 Mixist
gyms
 
 
 
post #216118 :: 2025.04.28 4:14am
  
  cabbage drop, Prestune and Arcane Toaster liēkd this
your voice really resonates with all the other pretty sparkly things going on
 
 
216480
Level 31 Chipist
damifortune
 
 
 
post #216480 :: 2025.05.04 8:38am :: edit 2025.05.04 8:39am
  
  cabbage drop and Arcane Toaster liēkd this
THIS IS SO SWEET ah i want more of this! lovely style, instrumentation, execution

tbh i think the vocals could be even more prominent than they are and it would really shine! maybe just my preference, they aren't buried either but they could take center stage more if you wanted them to
 
 
220075
Level 13 Grafxicist
grasshopper
 
 
post #220075 :: 2025.07.02 12:54am
  
  cabbage drop liēkd this
Arizona mentioned!!!! Beautiful song, love how everything flows together.
 
 
220459
Level 24 XHBist
Surfcroc
 
 
 
post #220459 :: 2025.07.06 1:13am :: edit 2025.07.06 1:14am
  
  cabbage drop and Arcane Toaster liēkd this
This is so cool! Love the lyrics and vocals, and the timbre of the guitars (harmonics?). Absolutely beautiful!
 
 
220484
Level 22 Chipist
Arcane Toaster
 
 
 
post #220484 :: 2025.07.06 6:56am
  
  Surfcroc and cabbage drop liēkd this
they are indeed harmonics!
 
 

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