ooh, the differences in the phrases convey who's speaking! some chiptune accompaniment for the stage... hmm, there's untapped potential there i think. imagining instead of a pit orchestra you have a guy sitting in front of a CRT with an NES hooked up, pulling up various nsf cues as needed

It feels very expressive, I got quite the same feeling as I imagined I was watching a theater piece while listening to your song :D