"I apologize for the poor quality of the work due to my own lack of ability."

is the best sentence i have read in a while, i will save that for when my boss complains about the quality of my work :D

I dunno, sounds pretty trancey to my ignorant ears xD

I really like the sidechaining effect on the kick, gives it that great sucking sound (uh...sucking in a good way)
Cool bass sounds!

that bass is just pure gold
it is so crunchy
song itself definitely has major trance vibes
1:11 bass sounds like an alarm and you gotta run
it's a very nice way to end it

can definitely hear the LSDJ sound design in this

This certainly was an authentic trance song here with some really cool shining factors! The punchy bass, the soft spoken melody, and the overall sound design here! Also i liked the variety you added in the song every now and then!

yessssss that screw attack fill at :40

I really love the groove this settles into, kick + bass is such a fundamental element of trance for me, and you nailed it.

oh okay, somebody came to play, cuz daaaang, this is good!