roz
Level 24 XHBist
 
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The Cruel Mother
 
  2nd/8   Σ27.812   Mar 3rd 2024 8:50am
 
 
as the deadline for my own battle stared me down i leafed through a dusty book of traditional folk lyrics in search of inspiration. one jumped out at me - a short ballad in rhyming couplets about infanticide. the mixture of simple structure and macabre subject matter reminded me of the kind of material which fascinated me as a child. i set it to original music, threw an arrangement together in a hurry, and hereby present the product for your listening enjoyment.

She sat down below a thorn,
⠀⠀Fine flowers in the valley
And there she has her sweet babe born.
⠀⠀And the green leaves they grow so rarely

'Smile na sae sweet, my bonie babe,
And ye smile sae sweet, ye'll smile me dead.'

She's taen out her little pen-knife,
And twinnd the sweet babe o it's life.

She's howket a grave by the light o the moon,
And there she's buried her sweet babe in.

As she was going to the church,
She saw a sweet babe in the porch.

'O sweet babe, and thou were mine,
I wad cleed thee in silk so fine.'

'O mother dear, when I was thine,
You did na prove to me sae kind.'
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186200
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mirageofher
 
 
 
post #186200 :: 2024.03.03 10:22am
  
  lasersphaser, cabbage drop and roz liēkd this
YESSSSSS this was my vision for the battle. pls take my HIGH VOTE
 
 
186210
Level 31 Chipist
damifortune
 
 
 
post #186210 :: 2024.03.03 11:37am
  
  Prestune, lasersphaser, kilowatt64, Viraxor, mirageofher, blockblockblock, cabbage drop and roz liēkd this
wowowow roz indie folk arc i will be eternally here for
 
 
186214
Level 31 Chipist
kleeder
 
 
 
post #186214 :: 2024.03.03 11:45am
  
  roz and cabbage drop liēkd this
this is beautiful
 
 
186234
Level 26 Chipist
agargara
 
 
 
post #186234 :: 2024.03.03 5:02pm
  
  roz and cabbage drop liēkd this
So good. Love the mix of chilling lyrics with gentle folk music. Reminds me a bit of Orion Rigel Dommisse in that regard.

Well sung, well played, and well mixed too! Love the harmony change at 1:40, very powerful.
 
 
186267
Level 27 Chipist
kilowatt64
 
 
 
post #186267 :: 2024.03.04 9:05am
  
  lasersphaser and roz liēkd this
Your folksy style is right down my alley. And always enjoy your singing voice. Solid work!
 
 
186352
Level 17 Chipist
lasersphaser
 
 
 
post #186352 :: 2024.03.05 7:12pm
  
  roz liēkd this
your vocal entries are always such a treat!! this rules
 
 
186416
Level 15 Chipist
glebogryzarka
 
 
post #186416 :: 2024.03.07 6:20am
  
  roz liēkd this
this guy can really sing. proper vocal harmony in there and the modulation works wonders. also bonus for the subject.
 
 
186437
Level 22 Chipist
Prestune
 
 
 
post #186437 :: 2024.03.07 11:44am
  
  mirageofher, lasersphaser and roz liēkd this
roz vocals never disappoint! Super cool chord progressions in this one as well! This really makes me want another folk major
 
 
186454
Level 24 XHBist
roz
 
 
 
post #186454 :: 2024.03.07 1:09pm
  
  mirageofher, Prestune and kilowatt64 liēkd this
thanks for the kind comments everyone!!

preston the chords are actually really simple to play because i have minimal guitar tekkers - here they are, in order of appearance:

Chord: E6 E G6add#11 A7sus2 D9sus4 Bm7add11(b13)
eb|----0--0-0--------0------5------3-------------|
Bb|----2--0-2--------0------5------3-------------|
Gb|----1--1-0--------0------5------2-------------|
Db|----2--2-0--------2------5------2-------------|
Ab|------------------0------5------2-------------|
Eb|----------------------------------------------|
Chord names transposed for ease of reading
 
 

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