Sounds pretty nice! But, you have same-tone constructive interference across multiple channels, leading to a bit of an unpleasant note volume in parts. This can be fixed by either checking each row to make sure you don't have two notes of the exact same tone, or by using a Pxx effect to move each tone up or down slightly, to break up the constructive interference.

I mean CAW

thanks for the advice xD i'm new making chips, but on the next one i'll make sure this wont happen again :)

CAW! There is still time to fix this one and resubmit it, but I look forward to hearing more from you!

mo daora victor, mas acho q vc devia variar mais nos intruments

Victinho, é vc?

Ah, já que todo mundo sabe né, sou eu sim

This is a nice first attempt, in my opinion. I think the overall musical composition is pretty good. The one thing that could be improved is the instrumentation. You have, as WhiteCrow said, the same notes playing on multiple pulse channels playing at once producing an odd, and, usually not, a very pleasant effect.

Another thing that needs to be looked at is the volume balancing and the monotony in the instruments. Having instruments using the same duty cycle and volume will get straining on the listener's ears rather quickly. I suggest looking at other people's modules, experiment and make some covers of songs you like to get the jist of how to do it in a "good" way.

Hopefully we'll see more of you in the future. :)