pretty cool. reminds me of blind melon!

[16:30:12] <PeachBellini> good vibes
[16:30:27] <Savestate> Good voice
[16:30:29] <beard> i think he needs more space to sing, he's holdin back
[16:30:42] <Savestate> beard: the bedroom vocal syndrome
[16:30:43] <PeachBellini> yeah, sounds a bit forced
[16:30:54] <Jimmyoshi> yeah too much midrange I think
[16:31:09] <beard> move down those 500s
[16:31:12] <Jimmyoshi> this is great though
[16:31:14] <Jimmyoshi> very jazzy
[16:31:23] <beard> yeah the actual composition is great!
[16:31:26] <beard> i really like it a lot
[16:31:36] <Savestate> belicous needs to get to a recording studio
[16:31:44] <Savestate> see what they can do at 100%
[16:31:54] <gotoandplay> his ideas are good it's just the mix
[16:32:02] <beard> yeah exactly, i respect this song for doing what it does
[16:32:10] <maxvdub> guitar could use some vibrato
[16:32:25] <beard> it'd be perfect for what it is if he was able to record louder vocals
[16:32:31] <PeachBellini> definitely a great entry but theres room for improvment imo

:O Live recorded stuff. Nice!

The mixing/mastering could be better overall; the vocals especially.
The capture isn't too bad, but some (more) compression, some reverb and maybe some light delay would give them a little more magic.

As for the guitar, eq-ing out the low-end (?) would be very beneficial (lotta rumbling, muffling sounds) (some delay there, again, would also work pretty well)

Otherwise, respectable effort; hope to see you in future battles :)