post #183573 ::
2024.01.27 6:46am Wegfrei liēkd this
i like the overall mood of this, and the sorta ambiguity of the major and minor chords of the progression. one thing i think it could benefit from is a little more direction in the melody, moving up for a while and down for a while with intentionality, landing on specific notes for a moment, reusing bits of material like notes or rhythms in new ways (or even old ways)! would go a long way in making it feel cohesive :D
Thank you all for the support! as for the the melody, i will take notes when creating future music... I always had problem with making melody, but i couldn't pinpoint what the problem was haha..