haha the vocals are mad cool!!! :D

Man, this song has been a concept for what feels like forever! This was originally going to be my entry for Venus during The Planets major, but I got hard stuck on what to make the rest of the song, only having this chorus idea stuck in my head...
Fast forward to April this year, and I ended up fully writing the song out for my final project for my Recording I class at college! Worked out nice since I wanted to do it for Spring Tracks anyway. The drums were played by one of my friends, but everything else was performed by me using various patches on my Yamaha DGX-670 digital piano. I'm really happy with how this turned out, even if its not exactly professional sounding. I do hope to one day record this song in a real studio, because I'd love for it to be truly commercially viable.
Also, sorry for the rough vocals. I am NOT a singer.
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Lyrics:
[Epic E. Piano Intro]
(Venus....Goddess of Love..)
[Full Intro]
(Yeah..)
[Verse 1]
I look up high, to the sky, wonder why
I never feel whole
Is there something that I'm missing from my life?
But then I
Caught a glimpse of something that wasn't quite
The morning sunrise
I saw you, and you saw me
Now you got me singin:
[Chorus]
Oh, Venus! The way you make me feel is
Intoxicating, your pull is oh so gravitating
And when you're burning in the night or in the middle of the daylight,
I just feel so right!
[Verse 2]
A scorching earth lies below all your clouds
And you try to hide it
Fearful of what others will have to say
Don't you worry
No matter what truth resides deep inside
It doesn't dissuade me
My love burns, just like your core
Which has got me singin:
[Chorus]
Oh, Venus! The way you make me feel is
Intoxicating, your pull is oh so gravitating
And when you're burning in the night or in the middle of the daylight
I just feel so right!
[Bridge]
And girl I love you, so, please don't ever let me go
Oh baby
Never, ever, ever (ever, ever, ever...)
And baby, no one appreciates, how you're the best out of the eight
But I do
It's true
So now I'm singin'
[Synth Solo]
(Hey!)
Oooh, yeah...