This one grows on you. If anyone doesn't believe me, listen to it all the way through. The ending trick is clever, too.

I like the sounds and the melody/progressions. The whole track through I was hoping for a solid beat to kick in though :D The end is indeed pretty cool.

Man I am still getting through all your entries for this compo! Doing all these formats is a great way to build your overall experience and confidence with tracking. This one came out pretty cool! Overall nice production, all your sound choices are good and melodies sound interesting. However it seems to be missing a well defined snare element in your rhythm section. This might just be a stylistic choice, but personally I would like to hear a stronger snare element come in at some point.

you should change the volume and key more, when it's always the same volume and key for too long it gets tiring

This doesn't sound yellow-green