I was going to give this a low score, but the vibrato won me over.

This is so bad so bad so very very bad!!!

~just kidding!!~

I'm actually doing some honestly good singing on my new album which is coming out soon and I think it's going to take over the world and become the new popular fad and all the murkan idol kids will try to copy it.
Also, run on sentences are very bad.

WHhooooooaaaa--oo---ooo-ooooaa (for the longest) For the longest TIIIIMMEE!!

I liked the plot-twist at the end.

This is like what I aspire to do as a musician.