There is something to this.
For the first 1:20 or so there seem to be a bunch of different ideas battling it out for attention and the whole thing seems kinda muddled and messy. But then the homogenised section at 1:20 with the call and response happens and pulls everything together for a brief moment, before the chaos resumes. I thought it was an interesting entry and it grew on me as I listened.
As far as criticisms/feedback goes I'd say.... better sound design?? (idk). Overall the composition is frantic but in kind of an intriguing way.