The mixing here is a bit quiet, but I like how you made Walkman melody sad. Dreamy indeed.

Yeah, the drums in the mix are really quiet. There's also no bass which is quite detrimental but I imagine it must've been harder to impliment with the more alternative pop style going here. I do like that hemiola with the walkman melody but I imagine it being more of an accidental thing since it's a 3 over 4 thing. Everything else is good.

"Hemiola"—that's what that's called?! New word, thanks @Soulox!