i love the groove here and the ideas presented. cool stacked harmonies. the little bar of "1, 2...." between phrases is a nice breathing point.
the delays on the parts (esp the chordal ones but there's also just some bleed in other parts) do create a lot of dissonance since you're shuffling around the harmonies so much from chord to chord, so a delay will be sending out like a major third and major seventh while the current chord is already including a minor third and minor seventh (for example). it's a cool and distinct effect if used intentionally or sparingly, but i feel like i could enjoy the harmony a bit more if it weren't going on so often. i can appreciate the serendipity of it though and if you dig it there ain't nothin' wrong with it