mirageofher
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spagubis anubis
 
  161st/272   Σ21.838   May 9th 2024 4:48pm
 
 
credito.

goji - chords and outro and vocal and spagubis
mioh - instrumental and vocal and puttogether


lyrico.

spagubis

helping out a fellow asian / getting away with tax evasion
goji here and he be crazin / hit the prez with some persuasion
pleez dont wack me with abrasion / mioh stops and eats a raisin
pulling up with guns a blazin / what the hell is all this phrasin

verse
yea I have a couple/grievances you know
all about the /good things they don't

choruses
sharp as glass, you'll entertain
you know why it is the same

id hate for you to/vote for the man
unless it is/in japan

simply wait and/hope for the best
calmly laying at her breast

i fucked up/all these fails
ginger root plus/doggy tails

spagubis
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189555
Level 23 Mixist
azurglade
 
 
 
post #189555 :: 2024.05.14 6:50pm
  
  WobbleBlast, gotoandplay, lasersphaser, crazygoji, kilowatt64, cabbage drop and mirageofher liēkd this
spagubis
 
 
189707
Level 31 Chipist
damifortune
 
 
 
post #189707 :: 2024.05.16 5:52am
  
  crazygoji and mirageofher liēkd this
what a quirky weird little groove. not sure anyone has ever made anything quite like this before. your kinda psychedelic-y lyrics pair well with the music. the vocals are a bit quiet! i think you could still nail the laid-back, subdued tone even if they were brought up in the mix/compressed/something. i do like that vocal tone a lot though esp on mioh
 
 
189735
Level 27 Chipist
kilowatt64
 
 
 
post #189735 :: 2024.05.16 9:16am
  
  lasersphaser, crazygoji and mirageofher liēkd this
Giving credit where credit spagubis
 
 
190704
Level 28 Chipist
gotoandplay
 
 
 
post #190704 :: 2024.05.29 1:18pm
  
  mirageofher liēkd this
i think you could have gone with a less aggressive kick drum voice - almost like a click of a kick - which would potentially address the overall mixing /bring the vocals into the fore without actually gaining them up
 
 
190749
Level 17 Chipist
lasersphaser
 
 
 
post #190749 :: 2024.05.30 9:04am
  
  mirageofher liēkd this
[spagubis]
 
 

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