hotfreshpizza
Level 6 Mixist
 
allgear
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springiness 
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equinox 
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germinations 
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flower power 
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spring in pants 
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romance of the sea
 
  335th/358   Σ18.146   May 29th 2025 12:19am
 
 
Lmao im so nervous posting this, i just couldnt hear the final version in the end because I would NOT stop nitpicking and overwhelming myself to make it perfect. Use your headphones or I will self-combust (or dont.. fine...)


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Gonna explain a bit behind this song, which I started a month ago, because I feel this is warranted.


It's honestly baffling how the whole songmaking process was. I initially took it as a small challenge, emulating one of my favourite artists. Eventually I thought it would be fun to make a water level theme track. I added a few things here and there, it wasn't so serious.

But then one portion took off, and I thought, "damn that kinda sounds good, wonder if I can extend that?"

So day in and day out, I worked on the track EVERYWHERE: in the coffee shop, the library and public transit (bus, train, Toronto's stupid street cars). I messaged different artists to get their advice on sound design. I even started analyzing and listening to my usual music playlists and noting when they'd pan to take inspiration from so I can immediately implement it in the song. I searched up tutorials on youtube for hours which is funny because I would never be so deeply involved with making music.

What was a 3 minute track turned into FIFTEEN MINUTES. There are 5 parts with at least 20 different melodies.

Which is why it was so DISAPPOINTING when the track didn't sound like the song I wanted it to be. I wanted to justify the effort that went into the song by making it sound perfect but I'm....just not...satisfied with it....

I never knew how important mixing, mastering and overall sound design is to the song production! And I don't know music theory at all so it a lot was just trial and error, and me hitting my head against the wall.

I kept rearranging, adding more unnessary melodies and synths, taking off my most favourite instruments just so I can perfect it until it became a distorted form of what it was.

So I went back to my original drafts and tried staying true to the main parts that I genuinely enjoyed even if they sounded terrible during a playback. I've chose to submit this one because I was so proud of myself making this melody (#17) and this part was the reason I started working so hard in the first place.


In the end, I realized that at my current stage, I'd never reach the sound that I want... so I decided to let this track go, instead of overwhelming myself with expectations.


Special thanks to kalowe and crazygoji for listening to my stuff and giving me feedback and thank you botb for giving me a reason to work on this song and honestly allowing myself to learn so MUCH about music by hosting this competition.

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Oh yeah,
here's a video from bomberman octoshoals with the music in the background if you wanna be visual and stuff, hopefully thats allowed to be linked to my song
(if it's just a song I'm supposed to post and not anything else I'll take it off and stuff lol)

https://youtu.be/xWYOUahyqBY

PS: the video is edited with an older version and i just added the version you're hearing now to the video, so it's my first time listening to it too!
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217970
Level 31 Chipist
damifortune
 
 
 
post #217970 :: 2025.05.29 8:41am
  
  cabbage drop, RevvoBolt and hotfreshpizza liēkd this
sometimes closing the book and moving on to the next piece is the right call, sounds like this was quite a journey!
 
 
217975
Level 6 Mixist
hotfreshpizza
 
 
post #217975 :: 2025.05.29 9:33am :: edit 2025.05.29 9:33am
  
  cabbage drop and damifortune liēkd this
thank you for reading that omg
 
 
219127
Level 23 Chipist
WobbleBlast
 
 
 
post #219127 :: 2025.06.17 6:40pm
  
  cabbage drop and hotfreshpizza liēkd this
I hope you continue going on these journeys and maybe share them again with us!
 
 
219586
Level 6 Mixist
hotfreshpizza
 
 
post #219586 :: 2025.06.24 7:09pm
  
  cabbage drop and damifortune liēkd this
DUDE IM so late but thank you so much these comments make the world to me
 
 
220052
Level 10 Mixist
BANANA TRASH
 
 
post #220052 :: 2025.07.01 8:14pm
  
  hotfreshpizza and cabbage drop liēkd this
Spectacular. Parts of it remind me of Earthbound, but parts of it remind me Wagyan Paradise.
 
 
220063
Level 26 Chipist
Prestune
 
 
 
post #220063 :: 2025.07.01 10:55pm
  
  hotfreshpizza and cabbage drop liēkd this
I think the instruments you chose are very effective for creating a weird underwater feel! I agree with banana trash, it kinda reminds me of Earthbound
 
 
222155
Level 6 Mixist
hotfreshpizza
 
 
post #222155 :: 2025.08.04 8:27pm
ayo this is tagged descriptioncore?? thats so funny XD

@banana trash
@prestune
yall thank you so much, i love how it reminds you guys of earthbound!!!!
 
 

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