ode 2 a broken window
 
  Dec 1st 2024 8:42pm
 
 
made the lyrics on my walk home and set it to a tune that I most likely have heard somewhere else. Idk if it's christmasy enough but I wanna do advent so let's go
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202381
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Webriprob
 
 
 
post #202381 :: 2024.12.01 8:44pm
  
  icrawfish, damifortune and kilowatt64 liēkd this
Also imagine me caroling it instead of whispering it... it's almost midnight so I didn't want to yell
 
 
202551
Level 31 Chipist
damifortune
 
 
 
post #202551 :: 2024.12.02 11:57am
  
  lasersphaser, Webriprob and kilowatt64 liēkd this
haha i think the vocal tone of this still delivers the idea in a cute way - a little hesitant and apologetic
 
 
202626
Level 28 Chipist
kilowatt64
 
 
 
post #202626 :: 2024.12.02 9:46pm
  
  Webriprob liēkd this
A really creative take. And I agree although maybe unintentional, the tone adds to the character of it!
 
 
202810
Level 27 Chipist
agargara
 
 
 
post #202810 :: 2024.12.03 10:50pm
  
  Webriprob liēkd this
Agree with all of the above, the hurried secretive voice memoness is unique and intriguing
 
 
205129
Level 25 Chipist
th4 D34D
 
 
 
post #205129 :: 2024.12.23 10:49pm
  
  Webriprob liēkd this
Daang the tune was upbeat and then the lyrics are sadge.
 
 
205239
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blockblockblock
 
 
 
post #205239 :: 2024.12.24 6:29pm
  
  lasersphaser and Webriprob liēkd this
I think if somebody apologized to me like this for breaking my window, I would probably forgive them.
 
 

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