omg ok!! this is absolutely lovely, what a great use of the tools available to you

this stuff is absolutely beautiful
I love when people use the vrc7 well, makes me happi
very nice melodies and chords

...but (I'm sorry plz forgive)

Were it not for the tags mentioning it, I might not have noticed the vocals. You can definitely hear them, just I feel that since you can't hear what the words themselves are, it kinda is just there (thought some may just be 'vocaled' chords, but I can definitely hear words (when I checked the ftm))

still very gud tho

ooo ooo ooo ooo
ooo ooo oooo oooo

honeybee
you’re as sweet as can be
honeybee
you’re just the cutest thing and you

bring me joy
you turn the sour into sweet

i love when it we meet
you’re my

honeybee
sweet to me
honeybee
sweet to me

oo ooo oo oooo
oo oo oo oooo

honeybee
you’re the sweetest one
potpourri
just the sweetest touch and you

bring me joy
with the nectar you display

you brighten up my day
you’re my

honeybee
sweet to me
honeybee
sweet to me

ooo ooo ooo ooo
oo ooo ooo oooo
oooo oooooo

great songwriting! kinda reminds me of a 70s soul ballad or something like that -- a cool style, and maybe somewhat underrepresented in chiptune.

I partially agree with SRB2er, the vocals are unfortunately kinda hard to make out, but I know that's pretty unavoidable with DPCM. Maybe there's some kind of preprocessing one could do to help this, but I don't actually know what that would be! In any case I think it would be cool to hear a version of this mixed in a DAW.

you know what's funny is i compressed the hell out of the vocals and it made them less intelligible and more blown out. whereas with the previous vocal tune 'to me that's you' i applied no compression and the vocals came out more clearly.