i'm proud of u alexa

lovely lovely lovely

this is super sweet! i think the vocals are great - good job putting yourself out there, and it is understandable and clear in the mix. you have a familiar habit of enunciating like a choir singer, which reminds me of me especially when i started singing and writing lyrics more. i don't think there's anything wrong with what you did here but i did at least want to say, esp for a style like this, you can let go of 100% of that pretense and get more raw with it, if you want. (this is self-advice too lol - it's still a challenge for me!)

the tuning of the clean guitar is a bit off, and that gets a little awkward alongside the computerly-perfect triangle wave. it's not really enough to detract from the song as a whole but is at least worth mentioning

really cool song! i hope you do more!

thank you! i hope to improve, and feedback like this goes a long way.

i was trying so hard to let go of the choral enunciation! as of this morning, i have a better idea of how i would want the vocals to sound, but that's esprit d'escalier for you

noted on the geetar tuning -- i really need to give the tuning a once-over *after* putting a capo on.

i really hope to keep doing songs like this and to expand on form and style and to keep on improving -- this is, so far, the entry i've done here that made me feel the most scared and vulnerable hehe

i love how the guitars and everything sound... very fragile and raw and authentic

always want to hug alexa