ASIKWUSpulse
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Shine Like Neon (Instrumental)
 
  11th/30   Σ27.185   Sep 18th 2022 7:35am
 
 
The whole payoff for this track to be what I would call City Pop is:
- Having some 80s stuff going on
- Jazz harmonies in a catchy and accessible pop format, like described in the battle info
- A singer

I didn't check off the third, so as an excuse I titled the track Instrumental, since imo the tune is very centered around a non-existant singer. Hope you like it anyway lol.

Resubmit update: checked of the third kinda, with "fake singers" ;) - 3 auto-filtered saw waves of different timbres to imitate 1 lead singer and 2 harmony singers. Tried my best to make the melody realistic, not going bananas with the note-range while still making it interesting.
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160836
Level 12 Chipist
ItsDuv
 
 
post #160836 :: 2022.09.15 4:29pm
  
  NardInYourYard and ASIKWUSpulse liēkd this
Nice groove! The chords flow very nicely. Great entry!
Maybe some melodic movement couldve replaced the singing, but it's good nontheless.
 
 
160884
Level 19 Mixist
NardInYourYard
 
 
 
post #160884 :: 2022.09.17 10:54am
  
  ASIKWUSpulse liēkd this
Yeah i used some synths and an electric geetar to replace vocals, but i had to dial back on the complexity so it could realistically be sung.
 
 
160898
Level 24 Chipist
ASIKWUSpulse
 
 
 
post #160898 :: 2022.09.18 9:44am
  
  ItsDuv liēkd this
Yep. Resubmission with 2 verses and not 1, but most importantly, some kind of melody!

What would be some good lyrics for the new melody?
 
 
160910
Level 24 Grafxicist
Webriprob
 
 
 
post #160910 :: 2022.09.18 7:37pm
do you still have a download for the original instrumental?
 
 
160925
Level 24 Chipist
ASIKWUSpulse
 
 
 
post #160925 :: 2022.09.19 7:25am :: edit 2022.10.01 7:57am
  
  Delita and Webriprob liēkd this
Version with original instruments:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1E207iNDqbvbO4YxIMQgc6g2-K0saS3Ms/view?usp=sharing
(edit: got confused by google drive when I shared the link. It should work now)
 
 
161574
Level 31 Chipist
damifortune
 
 
 
post #161574 :: 2022.10.09 1:31pm
  
  ASIKWUSpulse liēkd this
mad catchy hook
 
 
176492
Level 24 Grafxicist
Webriprob
 
 
 
post #176492 :: 2023.09.09 3:13am
  
  ASIKWUSpulse liēkd this
still classic
 
 

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