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The synths help everything jell together perfectly, and I love the hook of the chorus.
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Human Voice
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Rise of the Keyboard Warrior
Electric Guitar: Richard Matthews
Drums: Leo Collings
I'd just been killing some time, in a world of messages that we call being online.
Plastic should run in my blood, I might make it if I only could, oh yeah.
You just replied to me, it must be my destiny.
Said something and I don't agree; he's pressing buttons.
A trigger clicks in place; exercise a language face.
This wasn't my idea, there wasn't anything, that I could have said.
And as the caps lock goes on, you'll eat your words!
I don't have time. Help me find the line. You're a
Keyboard Warrior!
Metal brains in iron jars, with a hatred for eachothers hearts.
You've seen all of this before. It's the future, it's the future I've looked for. Look at the time man.
Is it your ego or, is it some moral encore?
Seasons don't set me free, but the sunlight enters my obsessions.
Our greatest minds behind those closed argent blinds. What will you do?
These wires, they set me free, but they also strangle me.
This nexus is my fire; I didn't set the flame. I wasn't to blame.
You'll eat your words! I don't have time. Help me fill the line. You're a keyboard warrior.
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Even with my bad memory, and a long while since I've listened to anything on BotB, I could instantly tell who made this.
Love hearing your tracks, nice one!
Love hearing your tracks, nice one!
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oh my god??? criminally catchy indeed, the drums and guitar are great additions, and i like your vocal style A LOT, super fresh and fitting. the only thing i think it could benefit from is a little clearer rhythm in the vox from time to time. i think the sound is great but if it fit a little more in the groove pocket i think it'd be more satisfying. maybe a few places where the lyrics could work a little more hand-in-hand with the musical line too and that would help keep it from those awkward moments.
but i'm saying this because everything else about this is SO incredible lol, it's so close to being just impeccable i know you can do it >:)
but i'm saying this because everything else about this is SO incredible lol, it's so close to being just impeccable i know you can do it >:)
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Thanks Laser, Delita Goto and Dam!! :DDDDD
Sorry for commenting so late, but I really appreciate all the feedback!
Very happy to have gotten silver in Vocal too!
Sorry for commenting so late, but I really appreciate all the feedback!
Very happy to have gotten silver in Vocal too!
