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I am realizing after the fact that the past tense of rend is in fact "rent", and not "rended"... oops
Orbiting Venus
A strong bond severed is a persistent pain, and one that is neither quickly forgotten nor quickly mended.
My condolences to my neighbors who may or may not have overheard me singing past midnight trying to get this done in an evening.
LYRICS:
I let it end,
I gave you no walls to defend,
From the daggers that tore you and rended
All of the times we shared.
I can’t atone,
Not while you’re left all alone,
Not when you ought to bemoan me,
For leaving us both impaired.
Searching the stars like the sea,
Longing with all of my heart,
Searching for you next to me,
Despite how we sundered apart,
You’re orbiting Venus for me,
While I’m stuck orbiting Mars.
I’ve had my days,
Most of them rough like the waves,
Constantly feeling so hazy,
Remembering our last call,
It’s been a year,
And I’m still a vessel of tears,
Since you always looked on me dearly,
And I couldn’t look at all.
Searching the stars like the sea,
Longing with all of my heart,
Searching for you next to me,
Despite how we sundered apart,
You’re orbiting Venus for me,
While I’m stuck orbiting Mars.
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wow, super well done! what a beautiful song
I misheard "not when you ought to bemoan me" as "not when you want to be lonely" and thought that would also go hard as a lyric
I misheard "not when you ought to bemoan me" as "not when you want to be lonely" and thought that would also go hard as a lyric
224762
very impressive and well written song.. wow!
vocals seem to distort at some point, but that doesn't hurt the performance in any way
vocals seem to distort at some point, but that doesn't hurt the performance in any way
