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i like that you're developing some sense of shaping the direction of the melody (i think i mentioned that before)! some runs of close notes, some leaping-away moments, things like that. maybe think about how to reuse little bits of that melody to make things cohesive overall - take a cool little rhythm or few notes from it, reuse them with different notes or direction/contour, and you'll start developing it into something truly earworm worthy
