post #190560 ::
2024.05.27 6:45am Wegfrei liēkd this
feels like you're developing a good sense of melodic shaping, i.e. the melody goes mostly up for a while, back down, etc. some more shaping with bends and vibratos could give it some extra flair, and some more detail in rhythm (less keeping everything on the beat, more variance).
post #190665 ::
2024.05.29 2:15am Wegfrei liēkd this
swings a bit tooo hard for me
usually when its as hard as this, other things justify why its there (like going really goofy with the instruments, or other perceived slackness in the rhythms of other instruments) but for a song that sits more straight-laced like this one does, it could do with a more traditional swing
Thank you damifortune! :)
I'll try to add more effects and off beat notes (I actually never placed notes off beat intentionally)
thank you gotoandplay! :)
The swing is massive on this one, I think it goes sped 6-6-3-4
This was made when all my tracks had swing because "it sounded cool" :)