Nice C64 instruments! The song is a bit repetitve, and I was expecting a lead to pop in anytime soon; I guess it was you're intent?
Nonetheless it's something.

Other than no lead that pops in very cool mjen

It begs for a good lead, kinda wasted song... I'd keep refining it, since there's still time until the deadline.

_{Actually, JUST DO IT AND RESUMBIT! :D/}

Right now, it seems like some theme in an RPG where you have to get to the exit in time before it like, blows up or something.
BUT, I think you should add a lead to it, just like everybody else is saying! It would really improve the song, and you are able to resubmit. \.o./

This kinda reminds me of one of my older songs, where it's just an arpfest and there is no real lead. Like everyone says, you should add one. However, it's fine on its own. At least it's not 10 minutes of the same thing like the Miami Vice loader theme. Also, it's nice to see another euro-styled Japanese chiptune.

With a super fast plinky lead, this would keep you afloat on the 777 seas.

Well actually, I was intended to release my other creations. but most of them are obsolete so, I just submitted this crap. sorry for the awful crappyness. kms

Nice work Sky Yoshi considering you find it so crappy XD
I personally liked it moar than your winterchips! Great vibe so far and could definitely benefit from some lead work. Keep it up!

it's a good start! definitely does not sound like a finished song though and gets quickly uninteresting once you realize it's not going to do anything new

damn this with a lead would be amazing

yeah, shame you could'nt evolve more on the tune.
Real solid foundation!

I'm liking the progression ~

Thank you for the fucking comments.
This song is made in 1 day. that's the reason of the crappiness.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HgY63s3Ft3A
Listen to that for washing your ears.

It just needs more melody, and a fifth chord or something.

Derp