Remynfv
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Prince of Fools
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Help! The Weirdo I'm Stalking is in Love With Me
 
  1st/28   Σ29.277   Oct 25th 2023 4:01am
 
 
Alternate Titles:
Till Death Do Us Part
Help! The Weirdo I'm Stalking is in Love With Me
I'm in Love With My Stalker
In Love With a Stalker
In Love With a Killer
Stranger in the Dark
Your Perfect Target
Your Perfect Victim
Help! My Next Victim is in Love With Me
Creepy Meets Creepier
Creepier than Creepy
Stranger Than Strange

Vocals/lyrics (Protagonist): Prince of Fools
Vocals/lyrics (Stalker): Remynfv
Production: Remynfv

Remynfv's commentary:
my plan was to make something like classic The Living Tombstone songs, and that served as a great jumping off point. i'm too shy to just dive in, and im DEFINITELY too shy to reach out to the botb server, so i yoinked one of my friends from the outside world. they got me vocals literally overnight, but unfortunately due to some scheduling conflicts i only had 4-5 days to make this halloween banger. now that this is done, i'm gonna collapse in a pile of post-hyperfixation exhaustion. it is gonna be 4 am by the time i get this submitted.
man i really wanna write more commentary but i gotta get to sleep so if u want the rest of my rambling leave me some really nice comments and i'll be sure get to it ;)
p.s.
(voice reveal!!!)

Prince of Fools' commentary:
it was really fun working on a collaboration for a song about my favorite time of year, i think the stalker got a bit more than he bargained for, or maybe they're now happily married, who knows :))

Info:
Software: FL Studio
Time spent in project: 25h 52m
Time started: Oct 21, 2:22 PM
Time Finished: Oct 25, ~3:39 AM
Plugins: 159, Channels: 179, Mixer Tracks: 42
Organization style: abject chaos

Lyrics:

INTRO:
(spoken)
here's a story
a tale most frightful
of a stalker
how delightful

following
through rain and sun
a strange psychology
had begun

fear and favor
struck the heart
and their victim knew
they could outsmart

their handsome stalker
would be theirs
and theirs alone
should they dare


VERSE 1:
awooo-oooo-oooo
im watching you
im after you

awooooo-oooo-oooo
there's no one else but you


CHORUS 1:
dear stranger in the dark
i feel you watching me
i cant see you
but i know im not alone

dear killer in the night
i hear you stalking me
i cant breathe
cause you're following me home

your eyes on the back of my head
your dark silhouette
it feels me with dread

i know i shouldnt care
but it's nice to know you'll always be there

VERSE 2 (Killer)
im not tryna be creepy
just want them to be happy
when they say they dont want me?
i want them even more

no one ever believes me
everyone tries to avoid me
maybe they're right that im crazy
but this one is insane

BRIDGE/DROP:
dear stalker of mine
ill leave my door unlocked for you
my table's set for two
ive already picked the wine

i may not be your first
and youve seen me at my worst
but tonight
youre mine all mine
youre mine all mine

CHORUS 2:
my heart pounds on and on
it's like it's counting down
and all around
the darkness presses in

my blood is racing through my veins
i feel your eyes
cold and bright
should i call my next of kin?

is it your footsteps i hear
i feel a mix of hope and fear
i know you have a knife
so carve yourself a place in my life

INSTRUMENTAL BREAK PROBABLY

VERSE 3 (stalker):
im not tryna be creepy
just want them to be happy
but when they say they dont want me?
i want them even more

no one ever believes me
everyone tries to avoid me
maybe they're right that im crazy
but this one is
(inside of you)

CHORUS 3:
till death do us part
you already stole my heart
and without my heart
whats a little exsanguination

my heart beats faster
when you are next to me
adrenaline is mixed with something sweet

its cold outside and my lips are turning blue
but i know my blood is warm
when im next to you

OUTRO :
without an escape
its just you and me
no one to hear the screams
i did this all for you

ill be the perfect target
one that you wont forget
and ill
live on in you
inside of you
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