WhiteCrow
Level 10 Chipist
 
NES/Famicom 2A03 w/ Expansions
23rd/26

 
cool breeze 
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face melt 
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hawt night 
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sweaty morning 
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sun burnt pants 
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He Holds a Sword Aloft
 
  125th/157   Σ20.428   Aug 6th 2017 12:47pm
 
 
He's got . a SWORD! !!

edit: Rejiggered the volumes and fixed the tempo. Hopefully, it's a bit better to listen to now.
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88812
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th4 D34D
 
 
 
post #88812 :: 2017.08.04 10:52am :: edit 2017.08.06 1:28pm
Nice melodies and composition, this is cool! The only thing I think you should work on is the volume levels. The bass and drum elements sound pretty low compared to the synthy elements. Good work so far!

*Sounds much better now that you adjusted it!
 
 
88892
Level 27 Renderist
b00daw
 
 
 
 
post #88892 :: 2017.08.06 11:26am
i think this suffers from the famitracker uneven tempo number bug that creates hiccups.
 
 
88895
Level 10 Chipist
WhiteCrow
 
 
post #88895 :: 2017.08.06 12:53pm
  
  Chip Champion, RazerBlue6, Jangler, th4 D34D and b00daw liēkd this
Attempted to address both issues at once, CAW
 
 
90043
Level 14 Chipist
uctumi
 
 
post #90043 :: 2017.09.03 10:30am
Really nice rhythm and melodic riff, but it's too repetitive for my taste, would've wanted it to progress into something more.
 
 

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