It's almost atmospheric sounding. I like how it uses the triangle for the lead and the fuller-sounding squares for the accompaniment. Super neat song here.

Great job using detuning to get a full and rich sounding backing part. As much as I love triangle leads, I wish this had a more prominent lead instrument. Too bad expansions were outside of the scope of this competition; I bet you could have cooked up something really cool sounding with the flexibility of a few extra channels.

I would've had more to this if the rules allowed for it, but alas.

lead instrument needs to be more prominent -- otherwise a very promising song!!

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*cocks gun*