Nice one dude, this is definitely chilled back. This would be perfect for a game over screen (after a continue? screen). I love the melody, great harmony. It could use more variance, but I think the simplicity works well for this type of track.

it is nice but why is it so long imho

@ Jangler uhh that's a question?

But I can kinda agree with him; though I like the atmosphere, there isn't happening much that keeps it interesting for the entirety of the piece. Make it long too and that boosts it a bit honestly.

Some more melody and a bridge will probably do the job I think, but I know you improve a lot (better than me defeatist), so I know you'll figure out some stuff by yourself Quirbs :P