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Very cool!!

There are some cool moments in terms of composition actually (1:00 in, and the bit that starts around 1:10 for example). There could be a better sense of structure, and sound design needs a lil' work (but that'll come with practice). There's a lot of room for potential here.

Also, have more confidence in your work! >:3

<3 tyvm! feedback means a lot in this harsh, cruel post-apocalyptic world of compos

Agreeing with FoD, the composing is all there, better drums would make this something special.

Hm, yeah, I really did rush this one - and I never put that much variety into my drums, anyway. Maybe a noise-only OHC would change that...