aw yeah, digging all the riffing in this one! very enjoyable mood. my only thought here would be that the melodies sometimes do a lot of wandering around, and maybe applying a little more focus to your choices of notes and rhythms would help them stick - going up or down with intention to hit a specific high/low point, reusing parts of your rhythms or tiny chunks of the phrase to build cohesion, leaving a little open space sometimes, stuff like that. maybe even try singing along to your own tune and transcribing what feels good! just some thoughts - i enjoyed what was here, too!