Lint_Huffer
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A Lone Home
 
  356th/441   Σ20.962   Dec 22nd 2023 11:47pm
 
 
It's 7am. Are you a bad enough dude to stay home alone?

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This certainly isn't a bedazzling tech demo by any stretch of the imagination - I feel like I should be trading in those Codist points for some Writist ones - but hopefully it's a reasonably-entertaining CYOA.

The bitpack's instructions to create something "telling the story" (as opposed to, for instance, something "based around the story") and the 24-hour time limit make IF the obvious choice, and thankfully Twine exists to make everything a breeze. Well, aside from the fact that Home/End navigation during text entry goes to start/end of paragraph, rather than start/end of displayed line.

Honestly, the bulk of the challenge here was finding enough contrivances to even come close to the Home Alone climax. "Old movie, but [record needle scratch] with modern conveniences!!" can be a bit tiresome, perhaps, but it's hard to ignore the pocket-sized elephant in the room with the gorilla glass screen.
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181415
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post #181415 :: 2023.12.23 6:03am
  
  mirageofher and cabbage drop liēkd this
fun writing, i enjoyed the sense of humor!
 
 
181427
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post #181427 :: 2023.12.23 5:03pm
  
  mirageofher and cabbage drop liēkd this
"They step right on your Funko Pops - technically a success."

best line
 
 
181895
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post #181895 :: 2023.12.29 2:46pm
"Hope you like e-begging"

*PFFT WHAT
now this is the best line
 
 

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