I can tell by play and fav counts that this one isn't going to do very well. That's fine, but can I get any feedback on it? I spent a lot of time on it and would appreciate knowing how I could have made it better.

harmonies/melodies feel kinda random and meandery towards the middle and onward. was this through-composed? i'm not sensing too much of any kind of form to it. might be more satisfying if there was more of an obvious pattern to things/less chaos. atonal music without a clear form can be pretty hard to listen to for most people. mind shedding some light on your compositional process/aims?

sure, the first part i wrote while i had a job and then the company shut its doors so my life quickly became very meandering and uncertain; this is reflected here by a confusing devolvement
i always forget i need to forget my reality when composing and remember what the happy people need
my music should be like the christ or minotaur and not the apocalypse or labyrinth - this is why metal uses perfect 5ths in their power chords instead of flat 5ths which actually sound evil

its cute okay, hav another fav <3