mirageofher
Level 28 Mixist
 
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coziness 
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candlelight 
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frozen lake 
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hot chocolate in pants 
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i did this on mobile oops

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181458
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post #181458 :: 2023.12.24 6:27am
  
  cabbage drop and mirageofher liēkd this
it's hard to explain why but this is so miohcore
 
 
181650
Level 21 Chipist
SRB2er
 
 
 
post #181650 :: 2023.12.26 1:08am
  
  cabbage drop and mirageofher liēkd this
The amount of metaphors here really, really go a long way!
Nice story!

Rip this guy's dedication at the end though... f
 
 
181662
Level 20 XHBist
blockblockblock
 
 
 
post #181662 :: 2023.12.26 1:54am :: edit 2023.12.26 1:56am
  
  lasersphaser, cabbage drop and mirageofher liēkd this
I've been listening to TISM's De RigueurMortis a lot lately, and for some reason I can really easily imagine snippits of this pieces as one of their sketch / spoken word interlude tracks, like a strong australian accent, half-whispered and breathy:

"you masterfully guide the beast on its happy little path, towards a secluded shopping area that you're sure doesn't have too many people around, so that you may search for your prey in peace. actually, there are many competitors here: an entire army of sharks circling the aisles. 'if they stop, they die,' said your father."

so good.

edit - also, second person perspective is my favorite, I know some people think it's gimmicky, but I think it's delightful.
 
 

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