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it has lead up to this moment.mp3
 
  18th/19   Σ23.013   Sep 19th 2020 3:34pm
 
 
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127219
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ASIKWUSpulse
 
 
 
post #127219 :: 2020.09.19 11:39pm
cw I'm sorry but I'm gonna go defeatistcore: This is bad, I was tired when I made this, I put very low effort in it - I was lazy. The music-idea was the best overall the rest of this entry, but imo it sounds like a tune I'm not even 1/4 done with even if it has a complete loop.

Though I'm glad it was not complete garbage iow didn't rate under 20. I happily accept critique so that when I "feel lost in the music maze, ie for a reason like feeling tired" I know what tricks to try.
 
 
127228
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TristEndo
 
 
 
post #127228 :: 2020.09.20 1:41am
  
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The track is definitely solid as a loop, it sounds a lot like a performance. I think if you added a battle drum section with some harmonizing build up at 1:03 after the chords descend to highlight the epic high notes. That is the only thing I could contribute to a critique.
 
 

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