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Hi Amelia, as someone who has seen your works before I appreciate that you communicate your gender, school life, and stress through them in an honest and sometimes funny way.
The comic drawings are quite simple but are very successful for an hour. If you are looking to improve your drawing skills you can do still life drawings. Simply look up pictures (or even better, make your own in your house) and try to draw what you see. This is a very good way to get a basic understanding of value, shadow, and shape. If you just want to do cartoons, just practice drawing cartoon characters that already exist and take note of the techniques they use to communicate certain things, such as clothing, expressions (personality) and body shape etc. This is not to say your drawings are not good, rather, this is just my personal advice to most people who want to get better at drawing. I do not have much to say on the technique other than this. Your narrative and storytelling has developed a style and will continue to improve. Amazing work, thank you for participating.
The comic drawings are quite simple but are very successful for an hour. If you are looking to improve your drawing skills you can do still life drawings. Simply look up pictures (or even better, make your own in your house) and try to draw what you see. This is a very good way to get a basic understanding of value, shadow, and shape. If you just want to do cartoons, just practice drawing cartoon characters that already exist and take note of the techniques they use to communicate certain things, such as clothing, expressions (personality) and body shape etc. This is not to say your drawings are not good, rather, this is just my personal advice to most people who want to get better at drawing. I do not have much to say on the technique other than this. Your narrative and storytelling has developed a style and will continue to improve. Amazing work, thank you for participating.
