this version is a little better. i transposed everything down by an octave (all samples were tuned to the wrong C and i were unable to check becaus of the batol rules) and added one note cut to the white noise (hanging notes slip easily if u cant proof-listen)

https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/239107754575265803/924661453791850516/deafness_is_a_powerful_instrument.wav