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aimless wandering in a field of blue
 
  Mar 3rd 2026 9:47pm
 
 
a lil thing(er) i made for this major cause i have been enamored with her production style ever since we met

song/lyrics are about falling out of a relationship.. i didnt really have a straight plan when i first started writing, t'is just how it came out lol

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lyrics:

i wish that i could keep
your touch, your love
it's all i'd ever want
your lips, the truth i long for

don't you see what you mean to me?
the final lap, make it history

[vocal bridge]

and when you see me falling
hope that you'll reach your hand to catch me now
'cause i've been so lost wandering
wishin' i could hear your voice here calling

i stay quiet, keep my voice down
choke the tears so nobody else hears my sounds
and when i feel like bawling
push it back, ain't nobody tryna hear that

you could take the words i've said and just spin them 'round
cryin' out for a life we could live, but how?
patch up the passage, packed my bags, but now
see your face and i plead through the crowd

longing for a life that's no longer allowed
tear those pictures off the wall of our broken smiles
now i sit in a room of a life once full
hear the voices laugh as my fate unfolds
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This song is a cover of :: Thingerthing - Random Idea
 


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post #234025 :: 2026.03.04 7:40am :: edit 2026.03.04 7:42am
this is such a great cover 'n' idea.
i didn't hear the original one. when i did, it totally sounded like an instrumental. your idea of putting vocals in it is so genius. it really fits nice, as well as the lyrics. everything is great and clean here.

the only problems are the instruments that sounds a bit loud--them being the chords and some instruments that are present after the vocal bridge. they fade away your voice sometimes. i recommend you to put some compressor or to lower some instruments.

and talking about your voice, HOLY SHIT!!! you sing pretty damn good!!
keep it up!

hope you get in one of the top 3 or AT LEAST among the 10ths
this is some incredible work here
 
 

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