It's interesting to see the different ways people have approached the challenge of making a walkthrough-like document that's still entertaining to read, and writing from the perspective of someone who is enthusiastic but doesn't really understand the purpose of a walkthrough was a solid way to pull that off!

That voice did occasionally feel a little inconsistent to me -- the actually good ASCII art and formatting didn't seem to fit with this character, and the descriptions of the powers felt almost too articulate.

Overall, though, I love the way this is written. Some highlights:

- the "Story" and "Chapter 3" sections, and any other part where the writer gets so excited about the game he forgets to include any useful information

- Chapter 4 is

- the multiple valiant attempts to spell "extraterrestrial"

- my favorite line: "I heard there is a place that looks like a Pizza Hut somewhere in that section but didnt' spot it yet, please let me know"

Fantastic ascii

Ha the voice of "I'm a tween very excited about this topic, but have no concept of how to work within this text type" stirs up copious volumes of occupational trauma for me — in a complimentary way, of course.

Agreed with lasertooth, though, that it almost looks like this person's mom came in and copy-edited parts of it as if it were a class assignment lol. Really like the attention to detail in the controller and ascii. I actually felt that didn't break character: it's totally on brand, I'd say, for a teenager to pour hours into an ancillary part of a task when overwhelmed by the primary goal.