I admit it is interesting how you put notes alternatively with 2 different sounds. Your composition skills are definitively something I want to see skyrocket for sure! 😊😊😊
But my ears grew bored of the patterns you recycled there and there. I know that you used this for making your song longer, but I guess you lacked time (and I fully understand it).
I send you good vibes and look forward for your next entries. Have a good day!