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i'm really happy you gave it a shot!
Level 12 Mixist
NES/Famicom Classic
47th/50
pulsitudinous
208th Σ4.046
triangulation
209th Σ3.849
blip factor
215th Σ4.105
famicommunism
209th Σ3.791
NES in pants
214th Σ3.765
The Penile Freak
i cant lie bro i learned how to make these in the past hour . i imagine this would be the main title for a video game called "The Penile Freak" where you have to beat up bad guys
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When you return to the main melody after the little triangle interlude I'm glad to hear a second round! I feel like that's a good indicator of a successful hook. ✅ it's a nice jaunty melody (whistleable!)
so one thing that jumps out at me about this is - it sounds like each channel is stuck with a single volume for the whole track. I think this could totally benefit from some attention to dynamics! get into some volume slides and/or tremolo!
Also perhaps changing up the noise percussion just a bit would help add variety, though I like the sound of what you've got, I like the short breaks where it sounds like the percussion pauses to take a breath.
real nice work for a first fami track!!
so one thing that jumps out at me about this is - it sounds like each channel is stuck with a single volume for the whole track. I think this could totally benefit from some attention to dynamics! get into some volume slides and/or tremolo!
Also perhaps changing up the noise percussion just a bit would help add variety, though I like the sound of what you've got, I like the short breaks where it sounds like the percussion pauses to take a breath.
real nice work for a first fami track!!
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