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DuccBoi
Level 21 Chipist
 
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The Indoor Fever
 
  302nd/348   Σ20.609   Jan 12th 2024 10:23am
 
 
You're stuck indoors and all you do is to listen to bossa nova.

Made in Furnace, used OPL2.
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183450
Level 31 Chipist
damifortune
 
 
 
post #183450 :: 2024.01.25 6:32am
something i think could benefit your tunes a lot is to explore the motion of your harmonies/chords more instead of making them all move in the same direction the same amount at the same time. different voicings and shapes can go a long way! ofc if you like how they are, stick with what you like, just mentioning it in case it's something you haven't considered before. i enjoyed the groove of this one regardless
 
 
187003
Level 14 Grafxicist
zaxolotl
 
 
post #187003 :: 2024.03.17 1:38am
This is some good criticism ^
Overall it's a nice tune! I just think it could go somewhere else. Like it stays on that same chord pattern for the whole song, and though the melodies and instruments are changing, it's still following that same chord structure
 
 
187055
Level 21 Chipist
DuccBoi
 
 
 
post #187055 :: 2024.03.17 1:15pm :: edit 2024.03.17 1:15pm
Thanks for the feedback. I'm still relatively new to composing and still learning new stuff. I'll definitely experiment with what you guys said.
 
 

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