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TANSTAACS - There Ain't No Such Thing As A Clean Slate
 
  242nd/420   Σ22.058   Feb 23rd 2025 11:01am
 
 
Later that day we took mushrooms and wandered up and down the beach for hours, each swell carrying us higher and farther until it felt like we were sharks, unable to stop moving for fear of being overtaken by the breakers.

We could have circumnavigated the compass rose in a single step if we chose - one giant leap for our kind.

We kept a close eye on the setting sun, but there was no green flash, and we took this to be a sign that no interlopers would intrude upon our shared reverie.

That night I lay awake in the tent, listening to you stir fitfully beside me, my mind crystal clear, eyes wide open in the darkness, tears soaking my cheeks and my pillow, caught like a butterfly in a net, buried in the sound of the surf.

There ain't no such thing as a clean slate.
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212293
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post #212293 :: 2025.03.05 9:47am
  
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The sort of uneven meandering pitchbends and rhythmic aspects definitely play into the description quite well, I think. There's just a hint of emotion in the meandering and this feels fitting
 
 
213197
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robotmeadows
 
 
 
post #213197 :: 2025.03.17 5:25pm
  
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you've created something really special here
 
 
213620
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damifortune
 
 
 
post #213620 :: 2025.03.22 6:35pm
  
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oh my goodness! this is the stuff trackers are made for. what an immensely fun listen, and lovely description too
 
 

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