This is the other side of your music I'm not totally familiar with, ¿and/or recently trying new things that I haven't listened to?
Is it unfinished, right? It's THAT sorrow/sad or what?! not particular fond of sorrowful songs that don't give clues to hope. So if that's what you were after, you nailed afaic.
BIAS ON I was seriously waiting for the metal part to kick in and headbang (as I mentioned before). :<
oh, yet another listen (but more seriouz now). I sort of understand what you were after now. Nice and sorrow composition. The organ like at the beginning, very nice.