your track reminded me of when I was little and had to lower the volume of the television because they said it was a lot of noise.
Very well men, good luck!

Little bit over the top use of the noise channel in my opinion, but great first NSF! Some enjoyable progression in here.

hahahah FranJohnson how loud do you were used to listen to nes music? = ) thank you a lot = D, yea RoccoW; you might be right since i frequent rhythmic metal styles, you just made me figured that the style in which i made the drums on my track are pretty much influenced from there rather than westen styled, thank you a lot for your kind words! i am definitely going to fix that on a eventual next compo =' )

Pretty solid for a first NSF. I agree with RoccoW, the noise channel use is a little harsh for this style of song. Using some of the higher noise pitches and less coarse volume control might help.
Sidenote: I can't not hear School's Out in frame 02.

thank you jmr! = ) it means a lot coming from one of my favorite chip-tuners in here = D yea, since i am not used to hear western chiptunes that much, i did not knew how to go about the drums and just managed to do it in a more rhythm-metal-ish style which one i'm more used to listen, nice tip over there = D i just went out with first sound that were similar to what i was seeking in the noise channel so did not realized there were higher pitches = ) i am definitely fixing that and the volume thing from now = D also hahahah that is a nice compliment = 3 thank you a lot!

thank you so much Apsarah =' D you are so nice! qq

Vilxdryad I'm very impressed!!

So, did you intend on copying "School's out" by Alice Cooper? Lol .. Other than, and the slight criticism that the noise channel is maybe a single bit too loud - really easy listening bluesy tune!! (I can swear here?)

this is actually fantastic

It's like fluidvolt's use of detune but not

thank you so much bazz! = D hahahah i did not intended to copy anything at all, yea! i am definitely going to pay attention to the noise volume level of my next eventual tracks, woa you made me realize that it is quite a possibility; i always were about the idea that the western taverns's music have some bluesy kind of style = D, that is really a compliment coming from you Sinc-X! =' 3 i am really in love with yours jobs = D i absolutely appreciate your nice words! = ) nice that you listened to my track Xyz! i just searched for some fluidvolt's music and man he is amazing; indeed, i did found out some similar kind detune in his instruments, i am glad to being compared with such top-notch musician! =' D thank you so much! =' )

You can find the examples I'm talking about in the /demo modules/ folder that came with FT. Pannonica and Gusts of Aeolus

Listen, you might not see this, but if you do, could we please talk

Wow, this actually v. good
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Oh noes, a wild abrupt ending appeared :D