Somewhat simple, but the unconventional time signature makes it a pretty rad tune. Combined with the interesting drum patterns, heavy instrumentation, and quite downer-sounding melodies, said rad tune becomes almost Tool-like. Love it!

Nice one and great job for a first track! I love the way the march in the intro goes into that cool harmonized scale drop before the main section kicks in. Really nice dark piece, and then a pleasant breakdown in the middle area. I like the transition on that section to a major sound from the minor sound of the rest. Great job, looking forward to hearing more from you. Sounds like it would be cool for a castle level but I could really see it working for a number of game level types.

we know that we're expecting some really good stuff from you as you continue! work on your instrumentation and timbres, meu! mandou bem!

This tune's quite punchy and hard-hitting. Using a time measure different than the usual 4/4 works out heavily in this track's favor.

this makes me thing of Metal Storm on the famicom, and it also has a similar feel of Kick master as well! :D this is great!

Man have a listen to my first famitracker track when I signed up here:
http://battleofthebits.com/arena/Entry/Diabetes/25437/
LAME... tracking is hard, i still suck at it!

I enjoyed yours though, I can hear that it sounds a bit 'made up as you went along' (not even that much really), but there's heaps of really good foundation here. Looking forward to more from you, keep it up!!
I give you 5/4 stars :)

way better than my first famitracker tune!