After a bit of delay, here's the .ftm if anyone wants it.

https://www.dropbox.com/s/v3eyj781ymmjdeb/Production%20Line%20Bop.ftm?dl=0

vrc6 is still my de facto expansion if i use one

This is pretty neat dude, this has an entrancing quality to it! I do think the textures could use a bit of variance, since it gets kind of repetitive. But you are gettin some great things down here.

Could see this in an RPG, I quite like it though it's a bit loopy as D34D says!

The monotony of working in a factory is perfectly reflected in the piece with the offbeat crotchets and chord progression. It's wonderful. I disagree with the loopy part the piece works like a well oiled machine, each part doing what it needs. Just like working in a damn factory. Good job!

An interesting idea. The repetitive composition kinda works given the context of the song, and it has that pitched noise loop and the driving rhythm to keep things going.

While the composition is mostly fine imo, my biggest criticism would be that overall the entry sounds a bit 'too' plain with regards to the melody and overall sound design - could change up the lead instrument in some sections and add some vibrato to the long notes. Introducing more adventurous moments in this, adding more elements or developing the looping percussion or chords further as the piece goes on would've been a cool way to take this.

Overall there's room for improvement but I like the concept and composition quite a bit.