i really like the beginning and some melodies and effects later on. mixing could be better though and hi-hat is way too loud imo.

tracker files would have been better if they used multiple effects ;___;

Really like the FM sounds you've used and how you've used them

You have set a really good mood in this!
I agree with Timo, mix is like the most obvious area it's lacking in, because of how muddy it is (only in some places though)

all the parts sound really great and i like the production and especially the ending with the gorgeous crickert samples really touched my heart

i assume that the different parts that "dont really go together" is supposed to be like switching channels on a tv late at night right, its cool imo